When I went to İstanbul, I didn't see any relationship among people as it is in Muğla. Wherever I went in Muğla, they behaved me in a hospitality way.
Muğla and İstanbul have similarites in some ways. As it is in Muğla, in a lot of place in İstanbul, you can feel comfortable and get relax. You may live foever freedom of sea in both places. You can get whatever you want easily, but as everytime if you have enough money. In both places there are a lot of opportunity to do what you want.
These two cities have more differencies than their similarities. You can go everywhere easily in Muğla, but it takes long hours in İstanbul. Crime rate is much more higher in İstanbul when we compare with Muğla. Development level of İstanbul is higher than Muğla and it's population is so crowded and this crowdedness results to disturbance. However, job opportunities may developed in big cities, number of unemployed people is higher.
Finally, I said if you want to relaxed life you must live in Muğla, but if you want to fight with unnecessary difficulties live in İstanbul...
hi ender.
ReplyDeleteI think your essay doesn't include thesis statement. In addition, your body paragraghs aren't enough. You can add more similarities and differences. you can improve it.
I agree with ÖZge.Thesis statement is lack.however,differences are good ;)
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